Comments on: Excerpt Monday: Limbo

By: Alexia Reed

Alexia Reed — Thu, 15 Oct 2009 13:40:14 +0000

Ok this was so funny. ROFL. Awesome excerpt.

By: Dawn Montgomery

Dawn Montgomery — Thu, 15 Oct 2009 09:20:49 +0000

LOL! Very funny.

By: AJ

AJ — Tue, 13 Oct 2009 00:06:45 +0000

Ha ha! This is awesome. What a great story. I absolutely love this description by the way, He has boyish dimples. In fact, if Peter Pan were Chinese, he’d look like my date.

By: Cate Hart

Cate Hart — Mon, 12 Oct 2009 23:35:03 +0000

RFLMAO! Poor girl. The is so funny, I loved it. You must share more!!!!!

By: KB Alan

KB Alan — Mon, 12 Oct 2009 21:16:42 +0000

LMAO that was great!

By: Shawntelle

Shawntelle — Mon, 12 Oct 2009 17:52:26 +0000

Great story! I can see the same voice as your other work. I loved this line in particular:

“Cue the tension. It’s like I’ve told him I have the clap.” It made me laugh out loud.

That poor woman. No wonder she hasn’t had sex in such a long time. I would definitely love to have read where this story goes. I couldn’t imagine having someone cussing at me in Italian in my head.

By: Kendal Ashby

Kendal Ashby — Mon, 12 Oct 2009 17:41:13 +0000

Holy moly that was extremely funny! I really enjoyed that and would have kept reading! Great concept. Great voice.
For next months EM can you share more?? lol
Cheers
Kendal

By: Cynthia Justlin

Cynthia Justlin — Mon, 12 Oct 2009 16:42:52 +0000

OMG, this is awesome! You totally had me hooked and smiling the whole way. I love how you made Big Ma larger than life even though she’s not physically in the scene. Hilarious!