Comments on: Excerpt Monday: The Threshing Floor

By: Shawntelle Madison

Shawntelle Madison — Wed, 23 Jun 2010 13:14:21 +0000

Ok, heading over to read the whole thing… Gee, I gulped that tasty meal of awesomeness down. So good Stephanie!

By: Kendal Ashby

Kendal Ashby — Tue, 22 Jun 2010 20:39:01 +0000

Very well written. I didn’t even realize it was first person until I read the comments lol. Very nicely done and what a tease of things to come.

By: Madison Woods

Madison Woods — Tue, 22 Jun 2010 02:05:20 +0000

Everyone else has already used the words I would have used, but they are right. It was mesmerizing, captivating, and excellent.

By: Debbie Mumford

Debbie Mumford — Tue, 22 Jun 2010 01:22:27 +0000

Captivating, Stephanie, and so beautifully written. Loved it!

By: Stephanie Draven

Stephanie Draven — Tue, 22 Jun 2010 00:58:28 +0000

Thanks for reading the whole thing, Jeannie!

By: Stephanie Draven

Stephanie Draven — Tue, 22 Jun 2010 00:58:13 +0000

Thank you, Lisa. It’s pretty dark, but I think it’s at least a little relatable.

By: Lisa Fox

Lisa Fox — Tue, 22 Jun 2010 00:54:58 +0000

What an awesome, compelling story. A total heart-wrenching pleasure to read. I’m so glad you chose to share it!

By: Jeannie Lin

Jeannie Lin — Mon, 21 Jun 2010 16:58:23 +0000

Mesmerizing! I had to take time off my lunch break to read the whole thing!

By: Stephanie Draven

Stephanie Draven — Mon, 21 Jun 2010 14:23:08 +0000

Thanks Vivien!

By: Vivien Jackson

Vivien Jackson — Mon, 21 Jun 2010 13:27:10 +0000

This voice is so consistent that I forgot to notice that it was written in first-person. It’s also wholly captivating. I dig the teaser twist at the end of the scene, leading us into the rest of the story. Very nice.