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How To Write Back Cover Copy (Or Adventures in Publishing With the Big Six, Part I)

Monday, April 23rd, 2012

These days, with the publishing industry in flux, it’s hard to know what to expect with traditional publishing. I recently announced my sale of a 1920s erotic romance collection to Berkley Books, set to release in January 2013. For new writers or those who aren’t familiar with what it’s like to work with one of the Big Six traditional publishers, I thought I’d share the process from (nearly) start to finish.

The first part was having my agent, the lovely Jennifer Schober of Spencerhill Associates, submit my proposal for me. The next part was a modest bidding war when more than one NY editor was enticed by my work. Then there was the contract negotiations and a brief call with my editor, Cindy Hwang, about the direction that the collection should take. (I submitted two of the three intertwined stories in the collection, leaving the last one up in the air.)

As it’s April, some of you may be surprised to learn that a publication date of January/February 2013 is very quick in terms of a traditional publishing schedule. It is almost a rush job. So perhaps I ought not have been surprised when, last week, when I was in Chicago for the Romantic Times Bookseller’s Convention, I received an email from my editor requesting that I look over the back cover copy that had been drafted for my book and get it back to her ASAP.

The problem? I hadn’t even started writing the last story of the collection and although I had some vague notion how it ought to go, the idea had been squirming around in my writer brain and taking different shapes. I had two competing versions that were still warring for ascendancy and whatever I put on the back of the book would lock me in.

I had two choices: I could either write such a vague summary of the story that it would fit almost anything or I could write my way out of the problem. I chose the latter. Writing like a fiend, I quickly began to draft both stories at the same time until one emerged as the clear winner. But then what? Berkley’s copywriters had taken the original wording of my proposal–in which I always include a brief summary of the written stories–but I still had to write one for the last story of the collection.

The steps I use in this are as follows:

  1. Identify a punchy description of your characters. My heroine in the last story is a plucky social reformer, and that would have been a good identifier for her. However, as the other two heroines in the book are both from different social classes, I chose a working class shop-girl. This contrasted nicely with the little punchy description I had for the hero, her boss, the wealthy heir to the Aster family fortune.
  2. Summarize the inciting incident. This is really the premise of your story–the event that’s going to lead to the dominant conflict. In the case of this book, the inciting incident is when the hero confronts our plucky working class shop girl with her diary of fantasies. It’s come into his possession under circumstances that should surely lead to her dismissal…but her handsome boss has other ideas about what to do with her.
  3. Wind it up with what’s at stake. In this story, my heroine isn’t sure that her self-respect is compatible with the kind of depraved fantasies she’s living out with her boss. She’s very aware of how her relationship compromises her, that they’re from different social worlds and any lasting relationship is doomed, not to mention the fact that she feels preyed upon. But when she discovers that she has all the power, will it change her idea about the relationship?

The first iteration for the cover copy looked something like this:

It vibrated with incendiary Jazz. It teemed with sexual abandon. The Twenties were roaring and the women—young, open, rebellious, and willing—set the pace and pushed the limits with every man they met…
Love Me or Leave Me
Society girl Nora Richardson’s passionate nature has always been a challenge to her ever-patient husband. Now he wants out of the marriage, and Nora has only one night to win him back. The catch? He wants to punish her for her bad behavior. Nora is offended by her husband’s increasingly depraved demands, but as the night unfolds, she discovers her own true nature and that the line between pain and pleasure is very thin indeed.
When I’m Bad, I’m Better
If Clara Cartwright, sultry siren of the silent screen and darling of the scandal sheets, knows anything, it’s men. And she’s known plenty. But none of them push her boundaries like WWI Flying Ace Leo Vanderberg. When he lures her into a ménage with a stranger in a darkened cinema, she feels like a virgin again. This time, though, she stands to lose more than her innocence. Clara may just lose her jaded heart in the bargain.
Let’s Misbehave
Working class shop-girl Sophie O’Brien has more important things on her mind than pleasures of the flesh. But when her boss, the wealthy heir to the Aster family fortune, confronts her with her diary of secret sex fantasies, she could die of shame. To her surprise, he doesn’t fire her; instead, he dares her to live out her boldest fantasies and Sophie is utterly seduced. She aches to obey the man, but struggles against being drawn deeper under his control. Is her lover a wicked predator with designs to ruin her, or does Sophie have all the power?

However, the more I looked at this I realized that my red hot and risqué stories from the Roaring Twenties all had a through line. These stories are all intertwined with characters re-appearing in each and I wanted the whole thing to flow more smoothly. And so what we end up with is this:

They vibrated with incendiary Jazz. They teemed with sexual abandon. The Twenties were roaring and the women—young, open, rebellious, and willing—set the pace and pushed the limits with every man they met…

In the aftermath of a wild, liquor-soaked party, three women from very different social classes are about to live out their forbidden desires.

Society girl, Nora Richardson’s passionate nature has always been a challenge to her ever-patient husband. Now he wants out of the marriage and she has just this one night to win him back. The catch? He wants to punish her for her bad behavior. Nora is offended by her husband’s increasingly depraved demands, but as the night unfolds, she discovers her own true nature and that the line between pain and pleasure is very thin indeed.

Meanwhile, Clara Cartwright, sultry siren of the silent screen, is introduced to a mysterious WWI Flying Ace. If Clara, darling of the scandal sheets, knows anything, it’s men. And she’s known plenty. But none of them push her boundaries like the aviator, who lures her into a ménage with a stranger in a darkened cinema… then steals her jaded heart.

Working class girl Sophie O’Brien has more important things on her mind than pleasures of the flesh. But when her playboy boss, the wealthy heir to the Aster family fortune, confronts her with her diary of secret sex fantasies, she could die of shame. To her surprise, he doesn’t fire her; instead, he dares her to re-enact her boldest fantasies and Sophie is utterly seduced.

One party serves as a catalyst of sexual awakening. And in an age when anything goes, three women discover that anything is possible…

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Fiction Trendwatch: The Roaring Twenties + Big Announcement

Thursday, April 5th, 2012

It’s never wise to write to a trend simply because it’s a trend. However, if you already have an interest in writing something that’s just starting to be popular, it’s often a wise idea to jump on that bandwagon before everyone else does. To that end I keep my eye out for trends.

I never suspected that Regency Romance would be the enduring historical love affair of the romance genre until everyone else in the world already knew it. I did predict the rise of Steampunk before it happened; it just wasn’t something I felt that I was well-suited to write.

However, I think my own interests and a trend may be on a collision course at last. After a modest but thrilling bidding war, I recently accepted an offer from Berkley Books to publish my new collection of 1920s erotic romance novellas. The anchor story, WHEN I’M BAD I’M BETTER, is based loosely on silent screen siren Clara Bow and a fictional bdsm love affair with a dashing American aviator. I expect the collection to release from Berkley Sensation in January 2013–which, for traditional publishing–is downright speedy! The first novella in the collection may be released digitally in anticipation of the release of the collection. (And yes, I’m dancing a jig over here!)

I wrote about my crazy serendipitous writing discovery here. So, now I’m going to make another prediction and we’ll see how it bears out. I’m going to predict the rise of early 20th century romances. In specific, the Roaring Twenties. Why? Well, here’s a list.

  1. Money. These have been hard economic times–so having plenty is a potent fantasy. The Roaring Twenties were a time of plenty. Folks were realizing the American dream, making money hand over fist, and using that money to experience all the joys that life had to offer.
  2. Sex. The twenties were sexy. Let’s face it. Dancing. Drinking. Music. Excess. Sexploration. Flouting authority. The decade has it all wrapped up in a feather boa and the slang of the era was almost all sexual innuendo.
  3. Gender Roles. In the 1920s women had just got the vote and were starting to come into their own. There’s a certain tension in all the literature about how women should behave as liberated human beings as well as mothers and keepers of family values. That tension hasn’t ever gone away and there’s a certain appeal to a more genteel era when men may have been less ambivalent about their own roles.
  4. Fashion. There’s a certain elegance to clothing in the early 20th century that we haven’t recaptured. From the lovely Edwardian dresses to the wild glitter of the flappers, it’s pretty–and it’s over the top. These have been hard economic times for the world; thinking back to a time of elegance and glamour is a pretty fantasy.
  5. Politics. There is a certain cyclical nature to history. I’m pretty sure that Margaret Sanger suspected that we’d still be talking about birth control almost 100 years after she was arrested for advocating family planning, but I admit, I’m a little stunned that it’s a hot topic again in 2012. It seems like almost everything that was a matter of political debate in the 1920s is back again with the exception of Prohibition.
  6. Collective Consciousness. I’ve argued before that things get into the minds of lots of people at the same time. You can see the evidence of it in media. First, take the surprise success of Oscar Winner, “The Artist” about silent films in the 1920s. It’s the first silent film to have won the prize since the very first prize went to Clara Bow’s WINGS. Then consider that the smash-success, DOWNTON ABBEY will return for its third season set firmly in the 1920s. We can expect all manner of beautiful sets and inspiring costuming. That new season will air within weeks of the re-make of THE GREAT GATSBY, starring Leo DiCaprio. Last, but not least, there’s HBO’s marvelous BOARDWALK EMPIRE, set during Prohibition. It will return this coming fall and, in combination with Gatsby, should create a snowball effect. Anyone else have any other 1920s trends they’ve spotted in media?
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It’s Not Easy Being Green!

Friday, March 16th, 2012

The Irish have lots of paranormal legends and myths that would make lovely stories. Unfortunately, I don’t write about any of them.

However, in honor of St. Patrick, who helped rid the Isle of snakes, I’m offering up a free digital copy of Midnight Medusa, the very first installment of my Mythica Series.

PLUS We have TWO Grand Prizes for TWO different winners!
Grand Prize 1: Winner’s Choice of a Kindle Fire or Nook Tablet
Grand Prize 2: Winner’s Choice of a $90 Amazon or Barnes&Noble
Meanwhile, I like to bring vivid senses to life in my writing. To that end, I sometimes play little association games. Since it’s St. Patrick’s day, now’s a good time to play that creative game with you–my readers! So, the idea here is to think of the word GREEN and tell me the first thought that comes to mind. The only rule is that you can’t repeat anything that’s been said before. So, I’ll start:

GRASS

How you can win?

  1. Like my Facebook Page and post below that you’ve done so.
  2. If you don’t have a Facebook account, you can still win by playing the game above and listing the first non-repeating thought that comes to mind when you hear the word green.
  3. While you’re here, why not pick up a free copy of The Knife’s Edge, my historical fantasy erotic romance.

Legalese: Contest open to U.S. residents only because I can’t ship foodstuff outside the country. Contest open only to those over 18+. Winner will be chosen at random from qualifying entries sometime shortly after St. Patrick’s day. Contest may be cancelled by host for any reason and sponsor will not be responsible for technical glitches, unavailability of chocolate potatoes, delays in choosing a winner or other similar problems. Contest void where prohibited.

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Siren Song wins 2011 CataRomance Reviewer’s Choice Award!

Tuesday, February 14th, 2012

Wow, I couldn’t be more thrilled at the good news today!

The folks over at CataRomance have awarded my steamy novella, Siren Song, a 2011 Reviewer’s Choice Award. Based on Greek mythology, this novella is about a modern day siren who falls in love with a Naval Officer. Like all the parts of the Mythica Series, the story revolves around the horrors of war and how love helps heal those wounds.

One of the first things I remember about writing Siren Song is how uncooperative my heroine was. She was was supposed to be a super-smart-mouthed diva, a hard ass, a bitchy queen who would try to eat up the hero and spit him out. Given her troubled past, she had every reason to be walled up and in need of rescue.

But Chloe had a thing or two to teach me while I was writing. Sure, she had a bad past. But she didn’t take it out on others. In spite of her potty-mouth, she turned out to be one of the most soft-hearted, innocent, sweet heroines I’ve ever written. She was also stronger than I expected her to be. She didn’t need rescue. She rescues herself and the hero besides.

One of the many reasons I’m very proud of that novella!

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