Victoria Janssen Talks about the Lotus Eaters from the Odyssey
Wednesday, December 15th, 2010Does HQN author Victoria Janssen know me and my people’s tastes, or what? When I invited her to do a guest blog here, I had no idea she’d manage to scare up an excerpt from the Odyssey, but she does, and she does it with aplomb. After her discussion, she’s even shared a little excerpt from her forthcoming novel, so let’s make her feel welcome.
The Lotus Eaters
by Victoria Janssen
One section of The Duke and the Pirate Queen would not exist if not for revisions.
When writing the synopsis for the novel I knew I had to visit an island, and if possible my protagonists needed to be taken captive by islanders. Since this was an erotic novel, the islanders would force them to compete in a sort of sexual display contest. It wasn’t until I’d had a little break from the manuscript, though, that I realized I’d completely missed an opportunity.
Luckily, around then I received the manuscript back with a request for some minor revisions. I checked in with my editor, told her my idea, and received permission to revamp the island scene by making it an homage to The Odyssey.
Here’s a brief excerpt from Odyssey IX, from a translation I found online: “…on the tenth day we reached the land of the Lotus-eaters, who live on a food that comes from a kind of flower. … the Lotus-Eaters gave [the crew] to eat of the lotus, which was so delicious that those who ate of it left off caring about home, and did not even want to go back and say what had happened to them, but were for staying and munching lotus with the Lotus-eaters without thinking further of their return; nevertheless, though they wept bitterly I forced them back to the ships and made them fast under the benches.”
Some historians suggest the plant meant was Ziziphus lotus, which is related to the jujube, though I suspect there’s also an element of fantasy in the description.
The idea of islanders who subsist mainly on drugging flora fit in well with an erotic novel. I could thus easily force the protagonists into the otherwise unlikely situation of a sex competition, which led to new revelations about their characters. The drugged islanders added not only an element of humor but also of dystopic fear, resulting in a chapter that was much more gripping than before the revision.
I knew my liberal arts education was good for something.
The Duke and the Pirate Queen is Victoria Janssen’s third novel for Harlequin Spice. Her novel The Moonlight Mistress was nominated for an RT Book Reviews Reviewers’ Choice Award. She’s also written The Duchess, Her Maid, The Groom and Their Lover. Find out more at victoriajanssen.com
Bonus
The Duke and the Pirate Queen is set in the same world as The Duchess, Her Maid, The Groom & Their Lover and features characters who appeared in that novel, Duke Maxime and Captain Imena Leung. Captain Leung is forced to abduct Duke Maxime, who is her employer, to thwart an assassination plot against him. He wants her. She wants him. Unfortunately, issues of birth, rank, and their own pasts are in conflict with their desires. And then there are the pirates, the storm, the hostile islanders…not to mention the sharks.
Excerpt:
They were forced to walk at spear-point through the forest towards an unknown destination. Imena glanced at Maxime, then indicated the man in front of them with the barest inclination of her chin. Another wary glance told her Maxime was now watching the man, too, and his slightly unsteady gait; he walked as if his feet were numb, or not attached to the ends of his legs. He smiled widely and incessantly, which she found disturbing. He still carried a spear, though; all five of the islanders did, in menacing contrast to the crowns and streamers of pink and orange flowers they wore tangled in their long hair. She wished she could see the other four men, who walked behind them and to the side, occasionally prodding her and Maxime with the butts of the spears.
Sunlight filtered down through the trees where the heat was trapped. She felt it more powerfully with her clothing on. Sweat had begun to trickle down her back, mingling with tiny fragments of bark from her tree-climbing and the sticky residue from insect repelling balm. She was going mad with the urge to scratch. Finally, she gave in. Aside from a brief poke from a spear butt, their captors allowed the movement.
Maxime eased over, his hand lifted to scratch for her, but a spear promptly shoved them apart.
She waited a few minutes, then asked, in patois, “Where are we going?”
One of the men behind her spoke. His tone was slow, measured. “Don’t worry, beautiful lady. We won’t kill you. Unless you do something we don’t want you to do.”
She and Maxime exchanged a glance, ripe with irony. She said, “What don’t you want us to do?”
Another of the men began to sing. It wasn’t any song she’d ever heard, and it didn’t seem to have any words, only vowel sounds. She didn’t think it was a language. The pitch wavered gently up and down long stair-steps. Mostly, it was loud. Soon, one of the other men joined in, and the first man, the one who’d spoken, began mumbling to himself. She couldn’t catch any individual words. Some sort of ritual?
She didn’t like not knowing who had taken them captive. She didn’t like not knowing what purpose their captivity would serve. …
She shifted her weight, so she was walking a little closer to Maxime. In a low voice she hoped the singing would cover, she said, “I don’t smell alcohol, but….”
“They do seem a bit to the wind,” Maxime agreed.
She waited to see if any of their captors would react to their conversation. None of them displayed any reaction; they continued with their strange song and mumbling. She murmured, “I don’t like unpredictable people with spears.”
“They haven’t harmed us yet.”
“Unless you count my bleeding ears,” Imena remarked.
Maxime hid his laughter in his fist.
They walked through the afternoon. When the singing finally died out, Imena didn’t risk speaking again, but she and Maxime communicated their feelings with eloquent glances, until it began to grow dark. As the stars began to be visible, Imena smelled a hint of smoke. Soon, she was sure the smoke was from campfires, some of them being used to grill fish on flat rocks. Her stomach growled. Maxime shifted closer and bumped her shoulder with his, suffering a punch from a spear butt without complaint.
The camp was substantial, with at least three hearths and numerous shelters leaning against the trunks of the towering trees. Perhaps fifteen men and women were in easy view, though she couldn’t be sure of that, outside of the flickering firelight.
An old man with matted hair came forward and, smiling broadly, gestured for them to sit. Under guard from their original five captors, plus five more who ambled forward, the old man bound Imena and Maxime, both wrists to opposite elbows across their chests and ankles to knees, and their ankles then bound to each other. He smiled all the while, his hands as swift as birds. Imena’s mood plummeted just as swiftly.

This book is an unusual find–one that attempts to blend literary erotica with Regency romance and emerges as something else entirely. Fans of erotica may find it too soft. Readers of traditional Regency romance might find it too sensual. I found it to be beautifully written and thought-provoking.