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My First Sale Story: Getting “The Call”

Wednesday, September 22nd, 2010
When I was an aspiring author, I had a vivid dream of how my first book would come to be published. After all my years of researching and polishing my manuscript about Cleopatra’s Daughter, an editor would clutch my beloved manuscript to her heart and sigh with joy. Then I would get the call, in which I would learn that my magnificent work was a rare gem in the literary world, and everything would be fairies and rainbows and unicorns…

Yeah. So that’s not what happened at all.

I’d always assumed that my book was a work of epic fantasy. Nevermind that it was historical. Nevermind that it was a journey more suitable to women’s fiction. I figured that since it had magic in it, it had to be fantasy, and pitched to a few spec fic editors who were excited to see the full manuscript, but ultimately decided that I was barking up the wrong genre tree.

At that point, it struck me that if I wasn’t even sure what genre I was writing in, I obviously needed some help. So, I set about getting an agent. Only a few days after I started my search, I received a call from Jennifer Schober of Spencerhill Associates. She excitedly asked to see the full manuscript of what I was then calling Cleopatra’s Daughter.

After reading the full manuscript she called to tell me that she “love love loved” it and wanted to offer me representation. There was no question that I was going to say yes. Jennifer wasn’t just my dream agent, she was also passionate about my work. Even so, I took the time to read over the contract before enthusiastically accepting.

Now, literary agents all know what happened next, right? As soon as you sign a new client, out comes every old manuscript from the trunk. And I had a few. I didn’t want her to think I was a one trick pony, after all. Sure, I wrote historical fiction. But I also wrote fantasy and romance and a few other things besides. I particularly love mythology and I’d just completed a little novella about a gorgon in love. Yes, that’s right. A gorgon.

Jennifer patiently read my stuff and adored the gorgon story which she assured me was perfect for Harlequin’s Nocturne line. I told her that I had an idea for an accompanying novella about a modern day hydra and she loved that idea too. I was excited to work on something as creative as updating Greek monster mythology for modern readers, and things were looking great! I was on cloud nine.

Of course, I had no idea the emotional roller-coaster I was about to take.

You see, an editor who shall remain nameless at a major publishing house, fell in love my big historical about Cleopatra’s Daughter. What’s more, she was taking it to the acquisitions board. My agent was super excited. I was super excited. It was happening! Just as I had hoped, an editor had clutched my manuscript to her heart and sighed with joy…

But then everything came to a screeching halt. There was a problem. You see, another book entitled CLEOPATRA’S DAUGHTER was just about to hit bookshelves. And it had been penned by none other than best-selling author Michelle Moran.

Now, I don’t think it’s possible to overstate my state of shock as my first major sale unravelled. In thirty years, no one had written a book about Cleopatra Selene. But now, somehow, the enormously talented and personable Michelle Moran had done it! I was plunged into despair at the thought that my manuscript was no rare gem. I’d seem like a copy cat! All my publishing hopes and dreams were in smoldering ruins. Ruins, I tell you.

I couldn’t be comforted. It was like the worst break-up I’d ever had. I brooded and listened to maudlin music. I stayed up late watching Elizabeth Taylor and Richard Burton on DVD. I ate an entire pint of Ben & Jerry’s Chunky Monkey. And I don’t even like Chunky Monkey.

Then I came down with the worst case of stomach flu I’d had in my life. I spent the next few days worshipping the porcelain goddess. When my agent called I was dehydrated, curled up in a shivering heap at the end of my couch in a pair of fuzzy slippers, when my agent called, and struggled not to groan into the phone. I assumed I was delirious when she said that Nocturne editor Tara Gavin had loved my gorgon novella, and loved my outline for the modern day hydra even more. So much so that she wanted me to turn it into a book.

I may have said something very eloquent like, “Wait, what?”

“It’s official,” Jenn told me. “A two book contract for Nocturne. Your first book!”

I sat there in my delirium contemplating this. After years and years of honing my craft and polishing my manuscripts, I had somehow sold my first book–sight-unseen–based on an outline?

There may have been some shrieking and then I may have murmured something like, “I think I have to throw up.”

I called my mom. Then I crawled back into bed. When my husband came home, we celebrated with shots of Pepto Bismol. I tell you, Pink Bismoth has never tasted so fine…

In the next few months, I was on my way to becoming a Harlequin author. My debut novel, POISONED KISSES, turned out to be a story that moved me. It’s one that explored fears of abandonment and the disguises that we all wear, even with those we loved. If you’ve ever wondered what kind of daddy issues a daughter of Ares might have, this is the book for you. And I couldn’t be prouder for it to be my first book sale and part of a longer series that I’m writing for Nocturne.

But there’s also a cherry on my chunky monkey sundae. You see, a few months later, Cindy Hwang of Berkley books read my historical. I don’t know if she clutched it to her breast and sighed with joy, contemplating dreamily about what a literary gem she had found. But she did make an enthusiastic offer, and now LILY OF THE NILE: A NOVEL OF CLEOPATRA’S DAUGHTER will hit bookshelves in January 2011.

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Secrets of the Sphinx

Tuesday, February 9th, 2010

Isn’t that a great title? I totally want to nab it as the title of any follow-up novel I write to my forthcoming book, which we’re tentatively calling CARNAL CREATURES. It’s about a modern day sphinx and a modern day minotaur caught in a desperate struggle for survival, but enough about that…let’s talk about the sphinx in Egypt. Thanks to Michelle Moran’s tip, I found this article in the Smithsonian and it’s fascinating.

Amongst the many interesting tidbits contained in the article is this bit of evidence that the Egyptians may not have been using a slave labor force to construct their great wonders:

Near the cemetery, nine years later, Lehner discovered his Lost City. He and Hawass had been aware since the mid-1980s that there were buildings at that site. But it wasn’t until they excavated and mapped the area that they realized it was a settlement bigger than ten football fields and dating to Khafre’s reign. At its heart were four clusters of eight long mud-brick barracks. Each structure had the elements of an ordinary house—a pillared porch, sleeping platforms and a kitchen—that was enlarged to accommodate around 50 people sleeping side by side. The barracks, Lehner says, could have accommodated between 1,600 to 2,000 workers—or more, if the sleeping quarters were on two levels. The workers’ diet indicates they weren’t slaves. Lehner’s team found remains of mostly male cattle under 2 years old—in other words, prime beef. Lehner thinks ordinary Egyptians may have rotated in and out of the work crew under some sort of national service or feudal obligation to their superiors.

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My Interview with Michelle Moran, Author of Cleopatra’s Daughter

Tuesday, October 13th, 2009

Anyone who has ever been inside my front door knows that I’m obsessed with Ancient Egypt and Late Republic Rome. I spent part of my honeymoon reading Margaret George’s “The Memoirs of Cleopatra” and much of the next decade researching the fate of Cleopatra’s children for my own novel, Lily of the Nile, which will release in January, 2011.

Now, historical fiction writer Michelle Moran, the best-selling author of NEFERTITI and THE HERETIC QUEEN, brings us the fascinating story of CLEOPATRA’S DAUGHTER. I’ll be telling you more about this stunning book in a separate review, but for now I give its gracious and talented author the floor!

Question: Though we’re given tantalizing hints about Cleopatra Selene’s life, the historical record of her is on the scant side which means that any historical fiction author writing about her life has to make some important editorial choices. I was particularly impressed with the ones you made, and I’d like to start by asking you about them. We know that Selene’s brothers disappear from the historical record, but we don’t know how. What made you choose the fates for them that you did?

Conjecture. We know that Octavian leaves Egypt with three of Cleopatra’s children. When he arrived in Rome, there were most likely only two. It’s highly unlikely he would have killed the youngest child, so what could have happened to him? Probably he died onboard the ship. As for Alexander, he disappears from the record at exactly the same time as his coming of age ceremony. I don’t think that this was a coincidence, given that he was the son of Marc Antony (a man who was beloved by many Senators and much of the army) and Queen Cleopatra. We may not understand this today, but two thousand years ago, blood relationships were everything. To be a male child – an adult male child – of these two incredibly powerful rulers would have meant that the men who served your father (and your mother) might also serve you. This is a very dangerous position to be in. Could Octavian really let such a child live? We know he had his own family members banished or killed. Would he have flinched to kill the adult child of his greatest enemy once the boy came of age?


Question: It seems to me that a student of history could view Octavian as a cruel and ruthless dictator. Conversely, a student of history could think of him as the benevolent Augustus who saved Rome. I tend to think of him as a little bit of both. How did writing Selene’s life story influence your view of the first Roman emperor?

From Selene’s perspective, Octavian would have been the enemy. He was responsible for the loss of her kingdom, the loss of her parents, and the loss of one (if not more) of her brothers. In reality, however, Octavian was an extremely complicated man. The best biography on him that I have read is by Anthony Everitt called Augustus: The Life of Rome’s First Emperor. Here was a leader who could be both tender and cruel, forgiving and merciless. He killed his enemies swiftly and probably without remorse. Those he valued, however, he rewarded with kingships and his deepest friendship and trust.

Question: Roman writers–often misogynistic in the extreme–have passed down to us a pretty despicable picture of Octavian’s wife, Livia. I’m often conscious of the prejudices that must have shaped her reputation, but find that she makes for too wickedly delicious an archetype to resist. How did writing Selene’s story influence your perspective on Livia and why did you choose to portray her the way you did?

Before writing about any historical character – even minor ones – I try to read as many biographies on them as time will allow. It is certainly true that many Roman writers were misogynistic. In this case, however, there may be some truth to Livia’s bad reputation, particularly where her relationship with her sister-in-law, Octavia, was concerned.

The tension between the two women stemmed from the fact that they had such different personalities. Whereas Octavian’s sister, Octavia, was compassionate, Livia seems to have been rather mercurial. And whereas Octavia was deeply interested in the arts – theatre, poetry, sculpture – Livia only pursued these things to keep her husband interested.

Livia was interested in one thing really: Livia. She probably would have viewed the twins as threats to the stability of her husband’s reign. As the children of Marc Antony and Cleopatra, Selene and Alexander could easily have found a large following of disaffected people who would have loved to see Alexander ruling Rome in Octavian’s stead. But because the twins were so young, Octavian was loathe to have them murdered the way he had their older male siblings killed. In the novel, Livia’s animosity toward them came from the knowledge that someday, they could challenge her own son for the right to rule over Rome.

Question: Another important editorial choice you made was in the portrayal of Cleopatra’s death. Recent Cleopatra scholars, including Michel Chauveau have argued that Cleopatra would not have had the means, the motive, nor even the courage to kill herself. Can you tell us about the choice you made for Cleopatra’s death in your book, and why you chose it?

This is a rather large debate among Egyptian and Roman scholars. What happened when Octavian arrived in Rome? We know there was a meeting with Cleopatra. And we know that soon after, Cleopatra was dead. Was it murder? Suicide? Enforced suicide (effectively – murder). No one knows if she had the time or the means because there are no eyewitness accounts. The only thing that’s certain is that when Octavian entered Rome she was alive, and by the time he left she was dead.

If I had to make a choice between the three, I would say it was enforced suicide. Governing Rome with Cleopatra still alive would have been impossible. She was the mother to Julius Caesar’s child and the mother to three of Marc Antony’s children. She was a queen – a powerful and respected one, despite Octavian’s smear campaign – and if she had remained alive she would always have been a rallying point for rebellion. Octavian knew this. He was a man who had no qualms with dispatching his rivals and he did so regularly, even if those rivals were family members. My guess is that he gave her a choice. To die with dignity (which at the time was suicide), or to die by someone’s hand.

Question: Your book ends well before Selene’s journey back to Africa. Can you tell us why you stopped at her betrothal to Juba?

Certainly! I wanted to keep the door open for a sequel (which is unlikely…but just in case).

Question: I just want to finish by saying how remarkably well-researched your book is, and I found myself longing for a bibliography. Is there a place you direct readers who want to learn more about Cleopatra Selene?

Yes! I have a short bibliography on my website at: http://www.michellemoran.com/cleo_QA.htm


That’s it! I had a great time history geeking with Michelle and I appreciate her willingness to give such thoughtful and in-depth answers to these questions. I think everybody in the world should read her book, so buy it now at Amazon.com!

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